Articulo um braço pra deslizar sobre tuas curvas,
Enquanto o outro se acomoda em teu pescoço.
E nessa trama vai-e-vem...
Vão-se meus pudores de sentimentos estranhos
Ultracelularescos.
Num instante mágico, peço-te: “canta!”
E cantas com um brilho absurdo
Longe de sintetizações.
Num piscar de olhos-diamantes...
Alguém me pergunta: “de onde vem esse som tão resplandecente?”
E na simplicidade de um amante voraz, sedento de paixões..
Sussurro:
-- São apenas cordas novas!
20 comentários:
Great, Buddy...
Pretty exciting... and clever.
Bravo!
Hi, John.
Why "tuas curvas" if you use "seu pescoço" or why "seu pescoço" if you use "tuas curvas"...
A similar question was asked me by Beth Cury once analyzing a poem of mine.
See you ...
This is our great privilege:
Here we are not only a poet, but also a musician...
Cheers!
I was reading this great poem to my friend Leo and we took up a quarrel. He said although I spoke perfectly, my intonation on the poema was not "right".
Now I wonder what is "right" and what is "wrong" in poetry...
The poets making history.
See you.
Hi John.
I guess I'm losing a friend "also" because of this great poem.
This is real poetry...
See yah.
Hey, John.
What happened to Henry Ford??
He only came in and said "What the fuck!!" and then disappeared...
Good morning, John.
This is not a poem to be put upon.
I would miss it hard.
Have a nice week!
"E cantas com um brilho absurdo."
This verse touches me deep.
Hi there...
This poem is the suggestion of a new manner to listen to music.
We usually forget there's a man or a woman behind it.
It's great.
Congratulations!!!
Hi John.
Real musicians and real poet-musicians are for real countries...
The poem is perfect.
For the animal, the male sex is more handsome.
For the human being, the female is more beautiful.
For the musician, the instrument is the cutest thing.
You are right.
Hi John.
Yesterday I heard Júlio Medaglia at Rádio Mitsubishi.
His talk reminded me of you.
Don't you think "to be anything" we need first to learn music?
O Amante 0,11mm deserves to be on the top for a long time.
See yah.
The poem has a nice balance between description of facts and feelings...
You could write great novels.
See yah.
I never thought you'd be ashamed of foreign feelings...
Your persona is so different from you... that's one of the things that make you so imaginative.
See yah.
Good morning, my friend.
Yesterday I said "no" to all.
But I make sure I do it again on second shift.
Serra is too weak for a man.
Dilma is too strong for a woman.
Bye
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John...
Please, forget about "Education".
Brazil needs Leisure.
Only great architects and great musicians like you can offer leisure to the world.
"Thing globally and act locally..."
See you
Good morning, John.
After "sedento de paixões", the reticences need to be settled: they are missing one dot.
See you!
Hi fellow,
Let's not forget about our Amelia's punctuation course...
It was great and helpful.
See you around.
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